Oh my! This is just so Gaahhh!!
You are so mean leaving it like that.
“Help! Someone!” I could hear a voice yelling. Wait! No! That isn’t just any voice... that’s Lois! Oh, Lois, what are you doing here?
Exactly what I had expected of her, to try and sneak on board. I shake my head and smile.
I like this part. It's sweet, I think.
I feel my eyes start to fill with tears. She really does love me. She always has. And I do love her, even if we aren’t meant to be together. I start to tell her that I love her, too, when I realize she isn’t breathing. “Lana! Lana, don’t do this. Stay with me. Please.”
She doesn’t respond.
Is she going to die? Maybe you can just put her in a coma or something. Yeah, then she will have some kind of amnesia and can't remember anything about the Secret.
Great Part!
