Where are Johnny Rivers and Patrick McNee when you need them?

Secret Agent, huh? Maybe Perry thinks Clark is a CIA operative working undercover at the Planet, and his frequent absences are for the purpose of gathering information on the bad guys. But you've hinted so strongly that Perry knows that CK=SM and that Lois is in love with him/them and is trying to play matchmaker that I'm not sure where you're going with this!

But I bet it's going to be a fun ride. Hope you get a quality Beta soon, although what you've already posted looked pretty good to me.


Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around.

- Stephen King, from On Writing