So I came to site and saw feedback for 'SevenSeconds'. Seven Seconds, Seven Seconds, Nancy.... Hmmmm.... That sounds very familiar. Oh, yeah, DUH! You did the beta. Needless to say, I was pleasantly surprised. I hadn't expected to see the story posted so soon.
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Yes, Barbara, this is so much a better story! This story is emotional and heart wrenching, and I encourage everyone to give it a try! Yes, I still recognize parts of the original story. And thank you for the mention.
I have to thank my beta-reader Nancy, who destroyed my hope to use my idea in a story. In fact, she has really made this much better. At least I think so. When she reads through this, I guess not even she will recognize my first idea, but it is there nontheless.
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Oh, it definitely has A plot....
But I will stop talking nonsense and go on with Seven Seconds Part one. This is for all of you, who enjoy relationship stuff more than A-plots. Though I wouldn't say that this is without any A-plot.
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Oh, my gosh! Even though I've read this at least three times, I still found myself biting my fingernails during the first part!!
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Awww.... Poor Clark
Would he be stuck in the Superman suit until he died? The mere thought disgusted him.
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Oh, this just holds so much emotion!
After the growl it became a howl, escaping from the depth of his being.
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<Giggles...>
Mrs. Superman. It sounded strange. She whispered the name, but that didn’t make it any better. It wasn’t his real name, anyway. So she might keep her name then. What would she call him? Superman? Honey? Darling?
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I think you very well expressed both Clark's and Lois' emotions.
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Do you have any idea how incredibly sexy these quotes are? I see nfic in your future!
His tongue brushed over her lips for a moment but withdrew again and left her longing for more. She invited him in. Clark followed her into her apartment and suddenly had a red rose in his hands.
His tongue slid against her lips, and she opened her mouth. She welcomed his flickering tongue with her own and felt him caressing hers softly. He stroked her back and her arms with his hands and…
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I just love this line. Isn't it beautiful?
“For you, darling. But I have to say, this night, that your beauty makes the rose pale in comparison,” he said softly.
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Oh, Barbara your writing has so improved over your first two posted stories. I just wanted to be sure you knew that!!
