Without Nancy this would never have been the story it is. She's a great beta-reader.
Ahh... I'm blushing.
Thank you, Barbara!!
This really is an
awesome part. I believe it's my favorite so far.
And I promise you, if he finds evidence for our criminal business, I’ll make sure they take your head first.”
And Mrs. Cox actually wants to marry the guy?
Clark Kent had just achieved the status of an enemy. Luthor started to really like this challenge.
Luthor, you seriously don't want Clark Kent as an enemy.
He should tighten his grip on her and invite her for dinner this evening. Lex Luthor stopped pacing and smiled broadly. Kent wasn’t going to stop him.
Evil, evil man.
Suddenly Lois kissed him with passion, holding him as if he was the tree trunk that was going to save her from drowning.
I just love this line!
Ahhh....
Her warm body felt incredible, better than in any fantasy he had had about this woman. Her tongue was even softer and silkier than in his dreams. When Lois broke the kiss, Clark roughly fell off of cloud nine.
“Oh, come on, Clark, I already know about her; there is no reason to hide her from me any longer,” Lois said a bit annoyed.
Here comes the old Lois.
“Clark, he told me the truth. He admitted that he made a mistake. He’s sorry, Clark. I think you should forgive him. Are you so blinded by love that you can’t see your wife’s true character?” Lois interrupted him.
Oh, Lois. There you go defending that liar Luthor again
Number two...I cannot believe you quit there!
I suppose it might help if dear Classicalla would finish beta on the next part, eh? Oh, getting pointy sticks after myself.
(Although in my defense, bakasi broke the part there anyway...)
Poor Mrs. cox had forgotten about Lois's Tae Kwon Do!!!
Ooohh, cat fight.
Oh, Patrick, you are so funny.
