Ann bless your little heart... I know you're busy right now and look at the time you took to give me all this lovely fdk...
“Okay,” she conceded this time. “But we’re going to do some broccoli too.”
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Broccoli!!! Poor boy!!!
Hee hee. Yes, I seem to be one of the few weird children who actually liked broccoli.
What an image you put in my mind, DJ. I can see them all
Oh good. You know that's always what I'm reaching for... that you'll be able to see the scene in your mind's eye...
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She began to type again and he focused in on the words she was typing. ‘Why Lois Lane Needs Superman...’ He could see her chest rise and fall as a soft sigh escaped her lips.
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He got to see more than he bargained for, didn't he?
Hah! Sue said the same thing... actually if I remember, she implied that Lois was writing nfic - especially since she closed the doc down so fast when Richard came in.
But the big fight they had had the night before was positively harrowing, and very well written.
Thank you. I'm ecstatic that you think it was "well written" because a good argument is difficult to write. I didn't realize that until I was writing one for New Misgivings... I rewrote and changed the thing like 3 times before I was happy with it.
I'm not going to quote much from their fight, but the way you wrote it was hauntingly, harrowingly brilliant. And I simply have to quote this:
Hauntingly, harrowingly brilliant... WOW. Ann thank you, again...
Richard is a wonderful guy, and yet I'm sure hardly any of us want to see him end up with Lois.
Yes, he is a wonderful guy... and that's why I wanted to do my best to give this story justice because I personally am going to be peeved if the writers just "off him" and take the easy way out to get him out of the picture.
You all might not like how my story goes... (hopefully you will) but I can say that I at least "tried" not to take the easy way out.
Would Clark have been watching?
I imagine if it had come to that, that Clark would've looked away, if for no other reason - it would have been to painful to watch...
Again, brilliantly written, DJ. You made me hold my breath, too.
Yeah, Ann held her breath too... but you know if you don't quit saying brilliant, I might get a big head.
You have permission to smack me if I do... but seriously, thank you so much Ann. Wow.
This is such a painful situation, DJ. I'm so curious about how you will resolve it.
Hmm, well hopefully to the satisfaction of my readers. Keep those seatbelts fastened... it's gonna be a bumpy ride.
Hi Sheila! Thanks so much for the fdk and comments. Yes, I think I'm with you... I think (at least in my fantasy world) that Lois could only ever be truly happy with Clark/Superman. <waffy sigh> Glad you're enjoying it. I'll try to have part 3 out sometime tomorrow.
Andreia!
Lucky Wells. He's the only that knows where all of this is going. Besides DJ, of course.
Yes, and I don't bribe easily...
Oh my goodness, your little hard-body icon totally cracked me up. That was so cute!
And has something ever been easy in this story?
Ahem, I'll take that as a compliment.
Hello! Honey! He has given you over five years! How much time you need exactly? More five years? Duh!
I know! Sheesh!
Duh!!!!!! She forgot her brain in the other universe.
Ha ha ha! I totally LOL at this.
/me is curious. What way?
She found her voice, or her vision of what her story should be... and maybe a little of what Ann said too... maybe subconsciously she found her way too... maybe... only maybe
Oh thank you all so much. Unfortunately I'm trying to get sick - sore throat, low grade fever, body aches. So all this fdk really made my night.
<DJ tries to look at being sick in a positive way - maybe I'll get to stay home tomorrow and I can work on New Misgivings...>
Thanks everyone!!! -- MR
