OMG! I didn't expect to get this much feedback so quickly. Thank you *so* much!
Since this story is all written, you won't be able to influence it, no... but on the bright side, it'll be posted fairly quickly. (A new part every day or so, so people actually have time to read them before the next is up. hehehe!)
So, Clark is Superman, and Lex is disappearing...to be a crime lord?
Where else would he go? LOL! I just thought it was hilarious that I could make him dissapear to take care of business - it kept Lois' life that much similar, too.
I love your portrait of young Lois Lane. You said you wanted to write Lois the way we know and love her, and believe me... you did!!!!
/me smiling from ear to ear. Ann, this is the best compliment I could ever hope for - especially coming from a die-hard Lois fan like you. *Thank you!*
I can just imagine little Lois Lane writing about missing sign posts in her neighborhood. hehehe! I love that part, it's pretty cool. If I may say so myself.
Lex and Lana... um... Well, you know. This is me writing this: the girl who would want nothing better than to erase Lex from the whole entire universe. I think you can guess what's going to happen to that guy. And Lana, well, she is more than Clark's assistant, but this is all I'll say for now. You'll find out more about her in the next part and the whole entire story on her eventually as well.
*hint, hint* I would suggest you pay attention to Clark's novel. I hope this isn't too big of a spoiler for anyone, but the book is very autobiographical. Very. You'll get more of it along the way.
Oh, and while there are any in this part, you can bet I threw in a few little inside jokes in the story. I'm geeky like that.
I'll point them out when there are some. (not that they'll all need to be pointed out.. in fact there's one which, if I add a comment about it at the end of the post mysef, I think Ann is likely to hit me! *lol*)
Thanks again to everyone for the feedback!!
