Okay, this is a cross-over, not a genre I'm a fan of.
But... Crossover with West Wing, one of my favourite shows (at least until they messed it up the last two years, but I digress)
Anyway, I really enjoyed this, Marcus. First, you captured the cadence of WW speech - I could hear those characters speaking.

C.J. especially.
it was only supposed to be four hours, the rest of the time he was tied to a giant exploding rutabaga waiting for Superman to rescue him, but..."
oops, the gas! but no problem for Lois Lane.
loved this, Marcus. Thank-you.
c.