This is shaping up to be such a cute story. But the title scared me a bit and I don't know what to expect.
Can you let me know if it is going to turn into a darker story? I love dark stories... I love cute stories... But I don't know which one this is going be! LOL
Thanks for sharing. Oh and I totally understand your love of the comma. I do the same thing and your whole authors note at the top made me giggle like mad.
