Looks like we might've been posting at the same time, Sheila. I swear, I checked for other FDK threads before posting!
Ah well, we'll consolidate. Here's my post from the other thread, and hopefully, one of the mods will delete the one I started.
Yay! A new chapter! And longer too!
Not to mention, it looks like Lois is starting to crack.
Great job!