Also, I am not a very experienced writer, meaning that my ability to turn out fascinating, funny prose in such a short time isn't great, so please be kind with the feedback!
Oh, BLAH! Lisa, I think you're a lot better than you give yourself credit for!
Lucy didn’t stop to think. She let out a right hook that dropped the woman like a stone.
Hadn't expected that one! Good going, Lucy!
Then her smiled faded and she sighed. Her mother was going to kill her.
Oh yeah. And just think what Lois will do to you once your mother is done. hehehe!
Seriously, Lisa - you should post more like this. I had a great time reading it! Come on, now, get those fingers tappin' on the keyboard a bit.
