Well, this is the first Fanfic I've written for anything. Turned out to be quite a lot longer than I thought it would be. Probably not all that good though
Congrats on writing your first story!!
Jonathan Kent II groaned as his body protested under the impact of the bullets. As he fell to the ground, he wondered if he had made the right decision. However, the thought lingered only momentarily before he quashed it. <No secret is worth a human life>, Dad had once said. Still, he couldn't help but feel a deep sense of guilt. <Mom, Dad - I'm sorry> was his last conscious thought before scenes from his life started rushing into his mind.
This part really grabs your attention and makes you want to read more...great job.
"No no, now that you mention it, I do have a lot of questions about that, but I was thinking of something else." Jonathan started while he hardened his face and mustered the courage to ask his question.
"Why tights? Why a cape? You're a grown man - don't you feel ridiculous?"
I can't wait until you post more!!!!
