Wow, that was lovely, Laura. The awkwardness between these two, the nervousness... and the intense longing, the sweet sexual tension, the giddiness of their togetherness and the wonder of the discoveries they make - Clark is super, Lois isn't being turned off or scared. It's wonderful how you write their very young love. At the same time, their youth is a bit of a problem right now. These two aren't ready to become a couple and provide for themselves in the adult world, are they? They are still kids, and too young to get married, at least it seems that way to me. What are you going to do with the wonderful love you have given them?
I'm so looking forward to more!
Ann
