Lois doesn't know Clark is Superman? That took me by surprise. I thought she knew
And I love it, at the end, when she starts telling Clark about Superman. She doesn't know who she is talking to, but for Clark, that would be quite a story to hear! ooh!
I love the way you write Shayne. Your storytelling made the scenes very vivid. It's as if I was watching a movie.
I'm hooked. Please, post more soon.
