Yay! I was so glad to see you'd updated. And you can keep going for ten more parts as far as I'm concerned. What does Mel like? Chocolate? Pizza? Pita chips?
Whatever it is, I'll send it along.
He noticed her presence and held up the picture to her, pointing to her expression in the photograph. "This look on your face, that was because I was editing your copy, wasn't it?"
Yay! He's remembering! And the picture gets to be part of the revelation, which I was hoping for. Now I'm hoping that her inkling in the kitchen was enough to get her past the worst of the shock.
Clark was standing in the middle of her living room wearing Superman's suit, asking her why she'd made him wear it.
I love this.
And fascinating revelation, with poor Clark so confused throughout. It kind of stands the typical revelation on its head. Usually Lois is the one whose hopelessly confused, and here, she's still confused, but she holds more cards than Clark does.
Why the lies? Why the different names? And, for goodness's sake, why the spandex?
"I remember that I love you. Actually, I don't think I ever forgot that."
*melts*
Oh, wow! I didn't see that coming
Apparently Lois didn't either!
Can't wait to see what happens next!
Caroline
