I enjoyed the story. I am with those who would rather have seen Lois tell Clark the truth.
And why oh why did Clark not go to MetU? Or seek a job at the Planet years earlier?
If you do a sequel consider doing an alternate ending with Lois & Clark keeping in touch.
I still can't see how Lois could watch some news event where she could tell Clark had secretly helped out and still not contact him.
For that matter I was under the impression that in canon Dr.Lane did not pay for Lois's college education.
