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As much as I love the episodes with Tempus in them, did you really HAVE to copy the dialogue from "Tempus Fugitive" for the revelation-related arguments?
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I think it's a great idea to start a revelation like this, an I especially love the pun at "Tempus Fugitive", although I think that the comment that Lois hasn't said anything since... (1866) isn't all that fitting.
Two very good points which proves that stories are always better if you're lucky enough to have a BR. blush

So time to edit. This is a good thing. I'm learning how to write my own dialogue. clap

I was home eating chocolate—cottage cheese.
Chocolate flavoured cottage cheese. It's a new flav—
I was doing my laundry.
—Lois Lane