Hey, great start, Sam. Your story is very original, and you've created a real mystery here. It's fun to see fourth(?) season Lois and Clark in the bodies of their younger selves from the Pilot, apparently trying to change history but possibly not being too sure of what the heck has happened in the first place, or who is behind this incredible time-travelling of selves and souls!
Fascinating! You've really made me like your Lois and Clark already. Particularly Lois. (Oh, there's nothing wrong about your Clark, it's just that your Lois has me absolutely intrigued.) Your story is witty and funny and very well-written, too!
Ann
