Beethoven, what story is this for? Having worked as a psychiatric nurse, I'd like to read it.
EDIT: Well, I think I figured out which story this is. But if it's the one I read, I didn't think any thing was wrong with it at all.
I also have to say that one of the ways psych patients cope with their illnesses (some of which are devastating) is laughing at themselves. (Of course, that won't work if they are paranoid.)
