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“It explains why Ralph was actually at the office after closing time.” Lois thought for a moment, then shuddered. “You know, I’ve used that terminal a time or two.”

Reflexively she wiped her hands on the back of Clark’s jacket. He glanced back at her.
LOL. So ew, but so funny!

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Glancing back, Lois noted that the young man was staring up at the skyscrapers and grinning.

In a strnage, insane way, it was nice. It had been a long time since Lois had seen anyone take that much joy in anything. Life in Metropolis was all about the destination. The journey was something to be endured.

“It must be fun to be Don Quixote,” she murmured.

“Tilting at windmills, Lois?” Clark grinned at her for a moment. “Isn’t that what we do?”
Aaaah! Love the visual of her looking at him as he goes gaga over the skyscrapers. Tokyo has it's share of impressive buildings, but since it gets earthquakes, they are nowhere near the size of the ones in New York. I also have a fond spot in my heart for Don Quixote and I like how you use it here. Yum.

I pop in and out, because I'm not super keen on Heroes, but seeing the characters from the POV of our intrepid reporters makes it interesting.


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