Hi, all. Thanks for the feedback. I'm sorry for taking so long to get back to you. Having finished this story, I've been hard at work putting the polish on the next one.
DS, you put it quite well. It does all come down to communication. It would be a pretty lousy story if they never got around to talking to each other, so you can take this promise to the bank. Next part, they will TALK.
Sorry, Classicalla, I don't have any plans for a sequel in the works. Too many other ideas. Now that I've gotten my feet wet doing fanfic, you can't hold me back. Posting my first fic to the archives and writing the first full-length fic that I actually like, it's all been inspirational.
Thanks, as always, Maria for being so faithful with the feedback. You would think Clark would notice something was amiss. I promise to get it all figured out next part.
Hi, Carol. Welcome. Just hang in there with me (you, too, Sheila). I'll try not to leave you hanging when I wrap this up.
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“Gifted hearing, gifted breath and gifted smell. If you had blond hair and blue eyes, Hitler would have loved you.
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OUCH!!
Aren't you glad I save my sarcasm for Lois's keyboard?
Hopefully a long chapter! I'm sorry I can't say much this time round, but I'm dying the next part!
The next part is the size of Texas. It's also too rough to post, as of yet. I have sent it off to the beta-reader, but you all know that DJ has a lot of RL responsibilities, as well. (As well as writing 50 First Revalations. We can't miss that one.) I'll get back to you all as soon as I have something worth posting.
Elisabeth