Okay, real feedback...
I love how you do that. Cute...
an Earthite dust storm might spread in the atmosphere and poison very significant parts of our planet.
Oh, no! Can’t have that!
"I have given the matter some thought," says Doctor Klein. "And I believe our best chance of bringing your father to the Earth and getting rid of the ship is to send you, Clara, out in space to deal with the ship and rescue your father."
Oh, I do hope she rescues Clark!
"You're wrong, Mom," I tell her. "Because I 'm so going!"
You tell her, Clara!
I loved the flying scene!
Mom is just looking at me. Then something seems to, I don't know, leak out of her. She's looking smaller. Defeated somehow.
Nice imagery. Poor Lois.
