Mmmmm, did you forget something, Pam? Like the WHAM!
I'm surprized at you. This flowed along in its sweet and uncomplicated way all the way to its waffy ending. I'd call that VERY predictable. Shame on you.
Good story, though, if you're into those sweet waffy stories with all that yucky stuff in them.
Tank (who hopes that the gentle writers aren't forgetting the advantages that whams can give to a story)
