Okay, yeah. Jumping around in time to key moments in their relationship. Got that.

And changing things causes ripples in time. Makes sense.

BTW, I forgot to mention how much I'm loving the parallels between L&C's respective situations and reactions. Nicely done.

I'm a little confused, though, about these timequakes. Why are they causing physical shakes in Utopia? And, if they're causing physical shakes there, does that mean they're doing the same at other points in time? Like four years from now? Or is the room in Utopia special because that's where they view time and that room is somewhat outside of time? Is that why they can see the changes? I mean, the paint color changed. And they noticed it. It's not that, suddenly, it had always been that color. You know what I mean? (This stuff gets tricky...)

Anyway... still very much enjoying this one. It's very cool to see the new takes, see what could have happened, and see these old events through the eyes of their future selves. The neat little realizations. Talk about hindsight!

Looking forward to the next part. smile

Paul


When in doubt, think about penguins. It probably won't help, but at least it'll be fun.