I haven't been commenting -- mostly 'cause I've been sneaking reading time at work
and don't want to compound that with feedback-giving time. But I am loving this story. You defanged Paul, but made Claude worse... potentially, anyway. It's great, too, the way Lois keeps getting glimpses and clues about Clark.
And Clark thinks Lois won't recognize him. He may be in for a big surprise.
Wonder how long she'll string him along?
PJ
