It's so interesting to see how your story ends up so close to the script, even if Lois's motivations are completely different here. Admittedly, Clark's motivations may be different, too. Since we've seen most of the story from Lois's POV, it's hard to know what Clark is really thinking. Is he in love with Lois? I think he probably is. Is he as scared of showing it as Lois is of showing her feelings for him as Clark? Perhaps both of them worry about what Martha and Jonathan will say?
One thing I found particularly intriguing was that Lois wound up seemingly idolizing Superman all over again, but this time she did it in order to win him as Clark. It's easy to think she made the wrong choice, but maybe she didn't after all? Perhaps her adulation of Superman will make him realize that he needs her to love him as the ordinary man from Kansas?
Anyway, it's so fascinating to be told the whole story all over again, except this time it means something else entirely. Where will you be taking us? Please come back soon and tell us more!
Ann
