Nice work. Glad that there wasn't any time travel/parallel dimensions for once. :p
I really like it when they elope; it seems more real somehow, it struck me that both "First Comes Marriage" and "I Will Always Love You", that are my absolute favourites, contain this element.
"Mmm... you thought of everything," Lois said, pulling him in closer. "Now..." She nipped at his adam's apple. "...let me see if I can make you forget everything."
It's phrases like this that makes quote games. Thanks for sharing.
