I was so hard on you in the last post, but I must say that you've thoroughly redeemed yourself in this section.
Your rendering of PML was honest and fit well. Likewise, as Lois heads to the Lexor it still feels like your own story. I can see why Lois wants to get away from it all--even to the pricey honeymoon suite.
I’m just taking a break from taking a break.
Hah!
“Did you say Clark? This is my story!”
“I heard him say Clark,” the man in question said with a grin.
“He definitely said Clark,” put in Jimmy.
“Definitely,” confirmed Cat, and she didn’t look happy about it.
This is rich. And she didn't look happy about it.
Elisabeth
