What had he really hoped to find in there anyway, he wondered? A rule that said "Thou shalt not make a move on Superman's love interest" – honestly?
Was there something in the water, maybe? Because it seemed to her like, everywhere she went, men were engaged in shouting matches with one another. Maybe they all had PMS or something.
"Oh no, you don't," she told Clark. "He's leaving. I'm not nearly done with you, buster!"
Can't you just smell the wrath coming... <g>
"I never lied to you, Lois," he said, carefully. "I just made up certain facts to keep you from finding out about... certain other facts."
Okay, this is brilliant dialogue...but it's the worst explanation ever, Clark! You can't get away with saying that LOL!
Besides, it would make it pretty hard to go out with you, then," Lois told him, hoping that he'd get a clue, once and for all.
Now that's throwing your cards down on the table!
Great story. Really, it's been a hell of a horrible day working in production, and this whole story just puts on a smile.
JD
