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Great job LL! Ditto LabRat on the atmosphere and setting. You were able to stay in the timeline, which is hard to do sometimes (esp for me! notworthy ).

Keep writing!!!!
~sunkist


October Sands, An Urban Fairy Tale featuring Lois and Clark
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