However, it seems to end at just the right place, so yay!
nods, nods! I does.
Although if you're ever in the mood to add some more... feel free! You know... we're really not going to mind at all. *giggles*
And the ending, which she had worded specifically so that there was a double entendre, was now horribly rewritten to where there was none of the original meaning left.
I still want to know what that double entendre was, you know... hehehe!
A part of his brain cried out ‘Fix it!’ and ‘Make it better!’ while another part ran frantically about the room, tugging at its hair and screaming ‘Run away! Run away!’
The rational side of his brain bitch-slapped this last voice.
*giggles* I know that was quoted more than once, but I love it! I love the bitch-slapped comment, too. hehehe!
“If you ever die on me like that again, Buster, I’ll make Dr. Hamilton bring you back just so I can kill you myself.”
aaawww!!
I'm so glad that you posted this.
I told you about a dozen times for sure, but I really loved this story!
(and now you should post the others!! like the one you had in your notebook when we went to Applebee's... remember?)
