I say, yay! another story by Erin, one of my favorite writers, but then I'd just be echoing what everyone else already said. I'd like to be original...
Wait, I just realized that I can't be original because I can only reiterate all the nice things that the other gentle readers have said in the prior posts. This really is a promising start.
Definitely a Lois Lane that we can all take to our hearts.
And, Erin, if you don't want to include a Clark Kent in this story (you know how cliched that would be) I could offer a possible substitute?
Now that I've read this part you can go ahead and post the next one. I think a 6 hour posting schedule would be good.
Tank (who thinks that the inclusion of a Lucy would be fine, but hopes that Jimmy can be left out of the mix)