Just read the whole story this morning!
Very waffy with just the right amount of an A plot to drive the important stuff - WAFF!!
I'd love to see an epilogue with a wedding and a honeymoon - the nfic folder would work nicely for that if you were so inclined!!
Lovely story!!!!!
There was one thing that was left out.... Lois' left cross to Dougal's cheek!!
