Well, Shayne, I usually don't like this kind of fighting - too intense and scary for me - but this time, you made me feel that Lois would survive and prevail, and several times I felt exhilarated. I t was great to see Lois throw that flag pole like an Olympic javelin thrower. It was such a triumph when Clark was freed. And yes, I admit it, I wanted to see Angelica killed. And when she was, I cheered.
And it was so wonderful when Clark came back to Lois!
To me, this fight felt like the climax of your fic. I may be wrong about this, but from now on I'd expect mostly cleaning up things and epilogue-like parts. How do Lois and Clark explain what happened to the stadium? What can they tell Perry?
What will it be like for Lois to remain a Slayer? How will Clark be affected by his experience?
And, not least: I agree that this is not primarily a ship story, but will you show us more of the Clark/Lois romance? Their romance must be slightly different from what it usually is, given Lois's strange and scary powers and Clark's harrowing experience.
Well, great! I'm still sighing with relief, let me tell you!
Ann
