Foul, I cry foul!
How can you call a story
in this
fandom and not have THE
Revelation? Ok, Lois somehow wakes up and is willing to admit to being in love with Clark. But nothing in the story lets us see her internal awareness growing. So the revelation in this tale is a hard left turn without warning.
Besides you've left poor Clark hanging in the wind. How is he ever going to come clean to Lois about Superman at this point?
