Well, we're missing our sweet, wonderful CK, but if we had that there would be no fic
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Wonderful as always Shayne! I'm SO glad that Lois was able to get the bracelet away from her daughter. I'm not so sure I'm happy CK appears to be trying to get custody. Hopefully they'll get it straightened out.
If he's having a harder time pulling away from the red K each time, why doesn't he just stay away from it? He's old enough to know better even if his daughter isn't.
From an editing perspective, I did notice several typos - riding/writing, due/do and a couple others that are escaping me at the moment. I'm sure your GE will catch them if nothing else
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And of course, I'm anxiously awaiting part 10!
Carol
