Hi Shayne. I have really enjoyed reading your story so far.
What I loved:
a)clark - he seems to have a lot more depth than the clark i am used to. The other clark was just so ..good... and this one has been tainted by some of the more bitter aspects to life
b)i totally love laura and this introduction to what it would be like growing up with these crazy powers. That really had me giggling at the thought.
I was, and perhaps am still a but suspicious of Joshua - why is he still involved in Clarks life? why does he get to be privy to clarks deepest darkest secrets? i would like to know more about their relationship.
and eek i hate lana and wish she was never ever a part of clarks life...i can't wait to see what evil things you get her doing
cheers, em
ps. this is my first post ever!
pps. when do lois and clark get together!?? post more please!!
