Hey Shayne,
I am really enjoying the story so far. In the last chapter, Lisa's newly forming bond to her father was heartwarming. The suspected collection of the bracelets scare me, as does Skeletor (i.e. Lana).
I'm also a bit nervous about the shaky road the two damaged people named Lois and Clark will have to face before they come together. I hope Lois gets let in on the secret soon- poor Lisa has had to keep her mom in the dark about a lot of stuff. The pressure is only going to build.
Thanks for sharing!
