Ack well I liked the date in the last part but the Lana part just seems an unnecessary burden in the story to me. But I'll stick with it. I am sure the burden will force the two lovers closer in the end or what would be the point. And I know you usually are good about fixing things. More soon. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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