Oh, I wished for more detail, too. But that's only because I'm sad to see this story end. I really came to adore the characters in this story. In fact, when you said Lois convinced Clark to get rid of his staff, I worried for a second that Joshua was gone. But then I decided you wouldn't do that (and was glad to see that I was right).
It was also good to see Lisa becoming her own person. Her devotion to her mother and awe of Clark in most of this story was completely believable given her age and the conditions of her childhood. But now that she has had several years in a more secure environment and one where Lois has Clark and so wouldn't be quite so dependant on Lisa for her emotional needs, it's good to see that Lisa has been able to grow up and become a normal teenager.
And I have to believe her liberal views will lead her to some day change her mind about donning the Super-persona. Altough, I'm glad she's rejecting it now as it more fully shows that she is her own person.
This was really fantastic and I am very sorry that there's no more to read.
