Cris
WOW! This is great.
Extremely well-written!

We really get to find out exactly how Clark and Lois feel.
Luthor's characterization is excellent. He is so evil and smug about everything.
He thinks that he has won.
Ha! I'm glad that Nigel reappears. (I'm assuming it's Nigel.

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I can't wait to see what will happen.
Tricia
