You posted! Even though you've had a crazy last few weeks you still managed to get this up!
I really like how you delved into Clark's feelings in this part. I loved the flashback with him and Lois. It makes me feel that he's really starting to realize what he's missing by not having a real life. I am curious as to how you'll fix all this. Lois and Clark will end up back together in the end (Right?). But how will it work with Clark not legally existing anymore? And what's going to happen to John?