Jojo, this was just a delight! I loved the explanation for the umbrella's demise, and I loved the whole setup for the revelation.
he suddenly realized that the whole plan was a terrible idea. What was he thinking? Had he really thought that showing up at her apartment, changing into Superman, and then dragging her off to a charity function would go over well?
Hee! I was thinking the same thing! All those poor sick kids... a homicidal elf... sounds like a recipe for disaster!
That was why he currently found himself staring at an extremely gorgeous, and extraordinarily mad, elf.
But now she's made the connection, and she might be even madder! Can't wait to read the conclusion

. I hope this means we'll be seeing more writing from you this year!
Caroline