Wonderful part! I'm really getting wrapped up in this story--it's always a treat.
I love the character dynamics in this part. Lois, whipping out those reporter skills. Although, if you ask me, she shouldn't have revealed her hand so quickly if she wanted to really catch Deter.
Then again, Deter is a sleaze, so good riddens!
And I like how you show us Jonathon and Martha's reactions from Clark's perspective. Why *indeed* would Martha be so concerned about his hand?
