I thought this was a kickass premise from the minute I saw it. And also, I've been very vocal about my love for first person Lois. Oh the snark. *happy sigh* Like here:
Except that he *has* kissed me good night - several times now - and he definitely wasn't shy about it.
The tone comes through crystal clear. But apart from the snark and sassiness, I like how Lois has these incredibly perceptive insights. Like when she reads Clark being worried he messed up when he skipped on their date or here:
Superman is still smiling, but I wonder if this is hard for him - watching me do what he was born to do.
I also liked the story that Clark tells her about learning to fly. It fit in so well, I could definitely see it and it was adorable
I can't wait for more.
alcyone
