Hmmm... I didn't get that Beth. I don't do nfic - writing and exceptionally rarely reading - so that's not it. I just got the impression that they hadn't actually... you know... yet. That they'd spent time together and had some serious make out sessions etc, but not 'that'. Not that they were waiting to get married or whatever, but that maybe for a big date night or something - I don't know. The 'honeymoon period' or whatever line could mean lots of things and not necessarily... that... No fights since the engagement etc.
However, knowing that, makes the interruptus scenes read differently, imo.
Of course, we must take your word for it
so if you say they have at some point... then they have.
That said, I would have liked to see you be a bit more specific about where that part of there relationship is. Nothing N or anything like that, just... remembering that night while making out in Jon's office or something. Being unable to keep their hands off each other [just like mom and dad *roll eye* says Ellie]. Something like that.
So, next part is when exactly?
Carol
