Oooh great part. I like how you rewrote the whole Luthor-jumping-off-the-building part. Yours was more dramatic and had a good amount of shock appeal for me. And original.
Plus Nigel's always seemed like an interesting character to play around with while writing fic. Whew, glad Clark found Nigel's info. /me rubs hands together excitedly And we'll get to see what Lois has to say about all this in the next part! (or something like that)
More soon!
Jen
