This is getting really crazy, and quite confusing. I love it. A powerful instalment leading the gentle reader to a fist full of questions that will only lead to more questions.
Still, a part of me (guess which one

), wonders why Lois didn't have some comment about her hair when she woke up in the hospital. After all it was the short-haired married Lois who was kidnapped, but she comes out of her unconsciousness thinking she's back in the days when Clark first shows up at the Planet.
Minor point I know, but since I've appointed myself the Lois' hair continuity cop I thought I'd mention it.
The story is very interesting and I look forward to seeing more soon.
Tank (who is amused by this Lois' constant denial of those feelings for Clark that keep coming to the surface even though she knows that they must have had some sort of relationship since they are married)