Yeah, what Beth said. Actually I can't speak as to why the gentle readers haven't been giving this worthy fic much feed back, I can only answer for myself. I'm lazy.
I know it's not fair, but I've gotten out of the habit of giving feedback on every instalment of fics that I am reading. I think it just comes from reading so many over the years. I do try to give the writers some comments along the way, just not everytime.
As for this story. It's actually one of the scenarios I've always wanted to see. It has the potential for angst ala TOGoM. It's able to give us Lois' fears for Clark at a time when she is just realising how important he is to her.
I agree that her fears in this situation would center on Clark, but I feel that its a bit unrealistic with a season one Lois to not be more worried about Superman.
This is a good fic and I certainly hope you continue it.
Tank (who sees an obvious revelation in the not too distant future)
