Thanks gr8, dede, and Jen!
I hope that the last flashback helped to clear up Jon's relationship with his dad and grandfather that some people were wondering about in previous posts. Although Jon still loves and respects his father, he still idolized his grandfather in a way that many young boys do with their fathers. Which isn't really a bad thing, necessarily, it's just a different dynamic than the classified "norm".
For the sequel I want to see more of Ellie, and more background on Jon and Ellie’s childhood, on flashbacks. Flashbacks on Kaylie’s life are appreciated as well, why is it only Jon who gets the fun?! I mean, Kaylie’s past is so interesting, she has a twin brother, and she never got her father’s approval, seriously, we are missing it!
Well, that's quite a wishlist, dede! I can definitely promise you more of Ellie. And Jay. Lots more of Ellie and Jay. In fact, you'll get so much of them that you might start to wonder if the whole story is about them!
Thanks again for reading, guys, and for your comments!
