I think this is the feedback for part 4, but with the title I'm not sure.
Once again, I appreciate how long your parts are. I'm sorry that I take so long to catch up, but I'm plugging along steadily reading. Slowly but surely, I'll get there.
I felt so sorry for Martha and Jonathan. We know that Jonathan throws himself into his work when he's upset, but where does that leave Martha? She doesn't look like she wants to throw herself into art; she just wants to see her boy.
I was so sure that Lois would figure out Clark's true identity when she leafed through his newspaper clippings. She's smart enough to realize that he's been following Superman's career for a long time. That's only one step away from knowing the truth.
Still enjoying.
Elisabeth
